Episode #17 by Stevie B
Episode #17 sees the General snap out of his day dream — his recollection of the events of 2 years ago when so many lives were lost.
As he leaves the landing pad we see some familiar faces, everyone seems to be here, reunited with one common aim — to finish this thing!
“I downloaded all the episodes and really liked the many variables added by new artists each time. It as a great lesson in suspense story telling and the art styles gave me the incentive to see what I could do. What the story probably needs is a final battle but I leave that for someone with better skills. Meanwhile, I had this idea and had fun developing it to this point and wanted to share it.”
“There is a tongue-in-cheek quality about the writing which not only references that the comic project was started two years ago, but also the last line could suggest an ending to the whole thing. Which of course sets up the viewer for a sequel if there is any interest on behalf of the artists.”
“I realize the story is ready for an epic battle, but had this idea which I hope you like. It picks up from General Claymore’s initial concern …so many lives lost.”
- Stevie B
Hopefully this episode will be the spark that the project needs to get it moving again — where will it go next? and just how will they finish things?
May 16th, 2008 at 5:41 pm
Seems like the end of volume one got kicked off the roll call. Mistake? ‘Cause I’m still interested in the project!
May 21st, 2008 at 1:11 pm
I wonder, if some kind of forum would be good for the project.
A place for the artists and interested viewers to talk about the story, the making, everything around and about it. Still leaving the artists in full control of what they do with the story, it might give some room for inspiring diskussions and brings the artists more together